Hey, very nice. I like the chaos of page 6. Only other thought (which I don’t know why I never mentioned on an earlier draft—on page 3, it should probably be “.280″, rather than just “.28″. .280 never quite panned out for the military, it seems. .280 British .280 Remington .280 Ross
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Hey, very nice. I like the chaos of page 6. Only other thought (which I don’t know why I never mentioned on an earlier draft—on page 3, it should probably be “.280″, rather than just “.28″. .280 never quite panned out for the military, it seems.
.280 British
.280 Remington
.280 Ross
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